Right now I am in the middle of writing a story. It is not the best. It is called The Kidnappers. My dad thinks that it is a little confusing. Well this is the part I have written so far.
The power went out.


Lizzie was home alone at the Morganson's house. She had just put Maddie to bed. "I bet Maddie is scared." said Lizzie. "I wish I said no to this babysitting job!" Then Maddie came down the stairs. "Lizzie, I'm scared." Maddie said.

"Why is it all dark?"

"The power went out because of the snow storm."

"I want my mommy!!!!!"

"I know Maddie, I want my mom too." Right then the door flew open. "Mrs. Morganson?"

"Shut up and come with me outside."said the tall, brown haired, big headed guy with a gun. He was all dressed in black. Lizzie stood up and started to carry Maddie to her bedroom. "Where are you going?"

"To get Maddie's shoes on."

"Okay but I have to come with you." They went upstairs to Maddie's room. "Wow this is a messy room!"

"I know." Lizzie said. "Her mom says that she stays in her room most of the time."

"Well hurry and get her shoes on. NOW!! We have to go now!!!!!"

"Where are we going?"

"To the beach."

"Yay we get to go to the beach Lizzie!"

"When does her mom get home?"

"At about 9:00"

"Okay that gives us enough time to get to the store, get to the hotel, change into the new swimsuits, and get out to the beach."

"Why are we going to th beach?"

"We don't have time for the long story! NOW GET HER SHOES ON AND PACK A STUPID BAG WITH A LOT OF HER CLOTHES!!!!"

Lizzie got a duffel bag and put most of Maddie's clothes in it. She put Maddie's shoes on and grabbed a box of diapers.

The man's cell phone rang. "We're on our way! Wait a second, Mr. Morganson is in the car? Oh my gosh! Okay, we will be out in a second."

"My dada is in da car?"

"Yes Maddie." said Lizzie. "We can go see your dad."

"Lets go." said Hugh.

"Okay." Lizzie said.

Hugh led Lizzie and Maddie out to the family room. Lizzie got her purple flip flops on. Hugh lead them out the front door. Before he left he locked the front door. When they got in the car, Maddie yelled "Dadda!!!!" Mr. Morganson hugged Maddie.

So, what do you think?